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Haiku my Heart #4

last light lingers low
ocean waves farewell my friend 
house seeks substitute


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Kim Mailhot said…
That must be a veru hard place to say good bye to...
Lovely words and images today. Happy Friday !
29 October 2010 at 18:45
Anonymous said…
Very good switch of atmosphere for line three.
First the sad departure and gentle farewell and than the brutal
"The king is dead, long live the king" sort of thing.
Clever. As is your photograph, with the same half and half idea.
29 October 2010 at 19:21
Noelle Renee said…
A beautiful photograph. I love the personificaton of the light, waves, and house itself, as if they were always there, a part of the eternal and only needed an observer for completion. Lovely haiku.
Noelle
29 October 2010 at 21:44
Spadoman said…
The yin and yang of it all. Beautiful photo, great haiku. Nice stuff!

Peace.
29 October 2010 at 22:54
Southwest Arkie said…
Such a beautiful sunset, and a wonderful background for your haiku.
30 October 2010 at 01:56
Magical Mystical Teacher said…
Inspired by your photo:

last daylight
sinking into sea
like a stone

Haiku My Heart, Dry Leaves
30 October 2010 at 02:12
Charlotte said…
Haiku poetry is difficult for beginners but I am beginning to grasp the concept....I might even have a go one day...
30 October 2010 at 07:08
Charlotte said…
Mum: How's this?

I am in my space
Waiting for my special male
Just come see me soon
30 October 2010 at 09:58
Boonie S said…
I love the photo. Is it one of your own?
I like your alliteration too, and your very clever consonant usage.

Have a nice day, Boonie
30 October 2010 at 10:09
Ramesh Sood said…
I am feeling lost.. thanks.. and therefore happier..
30 October 2010 at 13:01
foxysue said…
We all feel lost but very happy!!!

It is Saturday Night X Factor Night!!!

Whoop Whoop!!!!
30 October 2010 at 17:48
foxysue said…
Boonie, I like your comment, it sounds very clever too!!!!

Nice day to you my friend. x
30 October 2010 at 17:55
Boonie S said…
Clever? .... I used to be.....
Thanks for your kind words.

Have another nice day, Boonie
31 October 2010 at 06:42
Cassiopeia Rises said…
Beautiful and so meaningful.

Melanie
22 November 2010 at 18:13
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